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Open Poetry #44
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PrestonThePoet
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since 2007-11-07
Posts 87
0 posted 2009-02-12 12:22 PM

Great white rapids rush past my fingertips;
Deep pools of clutter tangle thought.
Mists of flavor toy with my senses.
Eyes flicker, they’re burning out.
Pulses shock organs.
Music dampens our activity.
Into a slow, gentle sway.
Past a state of consciousness,
Through the barriers of reality
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Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2009-02-12 02:04 AM

Interesting poem, Preston, I like it.
                                Ida
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