Open Poetry #44 |
Body Language |
Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Let me be the body piercing that glistens against the skin, of your words, and penetrates, your flesh, of thoughts, as I make, my own, body language, in your, poetry, in your, figure of speech. Let me dictate to you my musings, my feelings, onto your, sensuous vernacular, with my, fluidity, with my, vociferous, mouthpiece, as I give you, my oration, my diction, my key note, address. Vocalize your own oral, expressions, to me, in your own, tongue, as it revolves and rolls over your own appetite, your own urges, your own desires, of intimation. Be my little, chickadee, the little woodpecker on my forest, of fables, and fantasy, smacking away at the trunk of my petrified pining, my timber of legend, and tall tales, as I rub, and soothe away, the scratch, of your lubricity. Be the skin to my flint, so that we can ignite our own flicker of fallacy, our own volumes, of verbiage, of fire, and luminosity. Let me be, your spelling bee as I cocke the pistil of your petals pudenda pollinating, your glistening, buds of fruition and delivery, in the crimson clover of your, fulfillment. Be the airplane to my pilot, as I push, into your cockpit and gain new heights, in our, inclination, skin diving, back down, into the furrow, of your conceiving. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness, Richy! You render me 'speechless' once again with the passion ~ and brilliance ~ of your writing. I literally am having a difficult time keying a reply that adequately expresses my awe! Just know this, I think yer da bomb! Have a love-filled new year! Linda |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I think yer da bomb (what are we Peter Sellers now lol) too Linda Lou! Don't stand too close to me though dear, you might ignite my fuse lol. Kaboom!!! Oops, too late! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh Richy!! it is so wonderful to read you again my lovely friend!! Loved this offering from you... you sure do have a way with words! Happy New Year from Down Under! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
How lucky it is me, to know and share in the graceful beauty of your spirit Roniece. I have missed your charming personality, and your picture that always captivates so. Wishing you and yours a most Happy Merry Holiday! So nice to hear from you again. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh God, I am laughing so hard here. This is wonderful and funny. I want to shout out, "Oh please. Yes, please." How corny of me but I love this poem, Richy. Alison |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
That's okay Alison I'm used to being laughed at lol. How I've missed your unequaled enchantment my dear. Don't ever change okay, we'd spin off into the void if you did. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh - I am laughing at your creativity. You are wonderful. Yep, you are! A |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Okay now Ali dear, when I said I was used to being laughed at, now I'm thinking... maybe not so much. That was a little jokey joke there lol. Okay well, anywho... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You'll never get a freelance job in the 'adult' world but this is as cleverly constructed in innuendo as can be conceived. The verisimilitude is excellent.....! Eric |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
That's okay Ethome I already have one in that, biz, thanks for asking though. My challenge here, is to get as close as possible, to that edge. Happy New Year Dear Poet! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
let's see, having arrived safely through the minefield of euphimisms, I find myself blushing with appreciation for the double entendre...loved this: "onto your, sensuous vernacular" |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Lol, I've never liked puzzles but I sure like fitting words together. Thank you kind poet for risking the mines lol. |
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