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Paul D. Hennigan Member
since 2009-02-03
Posts 52Texas USA |
The thunder claps and lightning strikes Upon the barren earth likened to my soul The rains fall down like tears from heaven Making me shudder on every thunder roll Where are you my pretty face As it seems heaven will completely unfold The torrents of rain, the silver streaks Like arrows pierce my soul The bolt of lightning splits the majestic tree Leaving smoke billowing out as i reel Quicken to my heart i feel this pain And pray lest heart be still Brillant lightning flashes reveal your face Images on dark billowing clouds so near The rain in sheets keep falling down And on my lips i taste your tears |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Excellent Imagery to this piece i was really drawn into the storm Loved the poem Thank you for sharing Annie  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Paul! Welcome aboard the pip ship! I trust that you will enjoy sailing these pages of blue! I know that I will enjoy reading you! ~ as I just now have! A very fine piece of writing ~ and on subjects that I enjoy! ~ love and storms! (not stormy love, as much! lol) Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the images when thunder strikes and lights the sky very cool poem |
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