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Friday on Church Street
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Friday on Church Street |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Friday on Church Street You appeared like a child I was too afraid to look At such a beautiful man There was a watch clock ahead I fixed my eyes on the hands You are a very flawed man I'm not dumb enough to trust You who made me an excuse I'll never let you make me Into the other woman Juju -Juju |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And well you do, dear Juju. Sometimes appearances delude. It's always good to look deeper. Very nice work. Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Awww--come on dear Juju, Be a sport. This is very fine work, and I got a kick out of it. Love Bobby |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
Ah, that moment in time when we decide to throw caution to the wind, or protect our vulnerabilities. It isn't always easy to capture just a moment in time in our writing, but you've done it so well. |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Very wise---"The devil has made himself to appear the angel of light." A very good write--- art |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
A good decision, Juju - for your sake and the other "other" woman's. Owl |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Juju - I read your poetry and find you are very wise with life. Nice write... BC |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very enjoyable to read. yann |
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