Open Poetry #44 |
Love |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Hold no gods but love alone For love alone can save Love will gift a memory That carries past the grave Love demands no sacrifice Though it is freely given Under the banner of the heart No thralls or slaves are driven Love is peace and love is grace There is no lovers war No wrath no hell no divine judge Behind the open door No loving tongue may speak a lie No loving ear may hear Love claims all without recourse To manipulating fear Love holds one sacred command And one the only sin Do not deceive the one you love Reveal what lies within Share your passion share your heart And light a blinding flame Hold tight beneath the veil of night And have no fear or shame Hold no gods but love alone For love will set you free Break the chains cut through the mist Of divine tyranny Dedicated to Shannon, my beloved. I would like to add that I was brought up as a catholic, so I was taught that the passion of love was sinful and shameful. I was faced with a choice. So I chose to cut through the empty threats and superstition and embrace the one absolute truth of this world. Love. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Interesting poetic thoughts on love. I enjoyed the read. Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Love will gift a memory That carries past the grave Oh, yes... that it does. *S* I'm alone now but my life isn't empty... for once, I was loved. And I have memories. *S* Excellent work, Suncleaver! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You shower your beloved Shannon with very beautiful poems, dear Luke. In my opinion, there is no need to deny God, for He and LOVE are one. I understand what you mean by the teachings of the church! Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi , what you write is important and well expressed, all these definitions of love are true and open a lot of freedom. yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts on love...James |
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