Open Poetry #44 |
The Angel in the Sand |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Under starlit skies by sighing tides Lies an angel in the sand She’s sculpted fine in every line By two lover’s hands Witness to a secret promise Of eternity kept true What she’s heard are lover’s words Spoken from me to you As we lay down upon the ground The angel softly sighs She starts to sing she spreads her wings And bears us to the sky Two hearts made one as we’ve begun A journey to the soul Of true love gifted from above Where broken become whole At dawns first rays by break of day Her embrace we depart By passion’s dance of pure romance We have quickened her heart Dedicated to Shannon, my beloved. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
That is so so beautiful, I can see as to why it is in your heart. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine romantic writing...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, you are quite the romantic, dear Luke. Another tender and absolutely beautiful poem for your dear Shannon. Love, Margherita |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
A wonderful dedication, Suncleaver, a monument built upon the boundless shore, that the tides of time can't wash away! art |
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