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| Open Poetry #44 |
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love against the whole world |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. 
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Time an infinite scurrying state Balanced on a thread you race ahead into your destined fate A gallery stage for a spectacle play beginning and ending with each passing day And it's love against the whole world What's it all about Love against the whole world Always having to do without What else can it be If it's love against the whole world Then it gets down to you and me Love's flowing beauty and dazzling dreams escape from so many their day never seen Will love stray completely from those who have none Or will it bond us together until we are one And it's love against the whole world Where does the conflict end Love against the whole world So often to begin again Where can love's presence be Has it disappeared from this world Perhaps within your eyes I'll see Rick Delmonico |
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Jax Nova Junior Member
since 2009-02-04
Posts 20OK |
Very nice rythm, especially in the first stanza... I really liked that one.  All in all a nice subject and nice read. Thanks for sharing. |
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