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One wearing lonely
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One wearing lonely |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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The prism contained in expressions of light as an interim frame hangs on the unpainted lady its the winter abridgement of the leaves on contortionist awkwardly stretching in branches of curvature on the sky of rewind in her theatre of lonely. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-09-2009 09:00 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You have rendered "lonely" so very well, dear Michele. Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
You make me want to be lonely, ink'd! This is beautiful. Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goddess, you "wear lonely" very well. Perhaps because you know that one is never truly alone.  Warm hug to you, beautiful MicheleRose, Linda  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous write! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Darn, you make lonely so beautiful that I want to be lonely too. You just get better and better -- and better and better. When I think you can't get more better (grins), you do. How do you do that? You know I am a fan. A |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you so much for stopping by |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I love the spiraling effect the words create in this one...nicely done |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I really like the choice of words and the syntax, the way each work together to lead one to the theme of the poem. I like to think of "lonely" as a companion that can be sweetly kind, when one is in need of solitude, and I get that feeling here. A beautiful poem, art |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Goddess, wearing lonely would simply not become you. But then how could it, with that wonderful smile of yours.  |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I am right there with you. I know all about wearing lonely. I wear it very well. This is very well written Inkedgoddess. |
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