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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Anyway tender are the moments we share and I pour on him like a spring liquid from parch we speak like there has never been any time in between I tell him my sorrows and he wears them tattooed on his heart he is my friend and so much more waiting to be kissed he moves me for he is the only one in this world that loves me anyway [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (02-07-2009 12:02 AM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well, with that type of love maybe. But we all love you with another type of love. Wonderful heartfelt expressions for your true love in this. I love the conclusion. Eric |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hard to imagine how you could, not be loved any way. This one touches beyond deep Helen. Richy  |
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turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
Much of this I like. One spot may need attention. I pour on him like a spring liquid from parch Too bad, this thought has the potential of conveying a strong and deep involvement in a relationship. turtle |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I'm sure he is one of many but I do understand this you love him too |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Unconditional... However bittersweet, it blesses both. *S* Fantastic write! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - these words are very touching, and written like a great poetress... BC |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"...anyway." Yes, anyway. |
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