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Winter Dawn
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Winter Dawn |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Winter Dawn frigid Winter sunrise - over pure white snow a black raven shadow. ---b. e. adams (2/6/2009) |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, This is an effective short winter poem. Bobby |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Beautiful imagery, and economy of words---each singing their own song in harmony with the whole. A splendid work--- thanks, art |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wonderful zen moment perfectly captured. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Vivid! Crisp! Fresh! Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yin and Yang effect! Wonderful! Love, Margherita  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Just the right touch in that last line, Bruce. Excellent! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I don't have to travel to see snow scenes. I just have to come into Pip and read your poetry. So beautiful, I can see it so clearly. Owl |
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