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Open Poetry #44

Evolution

mein or meree thanhai
Junior Member

since 2009-02-01

Posts 21

0 posted 2009-02-06 04:20 PM

first i call her 'you'
then we call ourself 'us'
now i call her 'my'

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

1 posted 2009-02-06 05:35 PM

Ah, I love the way this evolves!

Thank you for the poem---

art

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2009-02-06 08:03 PM

Clever poem.
Ida

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2009-02-07 05:21 PM

Smiling with this.

Enjoyed!

HelmutB
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 964
Canada

4 posted 2009-02-08 07:06 PM

Indeed you do.........I do call my.........one.
Well done

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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