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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2009-02-06 08:50 AM

Inside Is An Empty Space

I cannot find those words
Once softly spoken
How does one write
Whilst feeling heartbroken

Inside is an empty space
One only you can fill
Heartache lingers on
I miss you and always will

This feeling I cannot deny
It's hurting too much
Still my heart yearns
Longing to feel your touch

As I was still missing you
Through silence I cry
Yet I hung on to hope
As I cannot write goodbye

Hope©2009

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2009-02-06 11:04 AM

High Hope!

A beautiful presentation of a sweetly sad love song.

~ May you never have to write "goodbye" to anyone ~ or anything ~ that you care about.

Warm hug,
Linda

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-02-09 12:04 PM

I'm entirely too well acquainted with this emptiness... but you wrote it beautifully. *S*

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-02-09 06:58 PM

Dear Hope at her best, really! You write about this constant yearning always so intensely and beautifully.

(But I do continue to wish you to open your heart to new love, you need not say goodbye, he will always be part of you, but you can say goodbye to the past, so that it does not become an obstacle to live the present).

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2009-02-09 07:14 PM

Yo dear HopeS,

This is a lovely poem.

Now you have to find that missing piece. I'm sure it's out there.

Love Bobby

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2009-02-09 08:18 PM

This feeling I cannot deny
It's hurting too much
Still my heart yearns
Longing to feel your touch

As I was still missing you
Through silence I cry
Yet I hung on to hope
As I cannot write goodbye

This really speaks the heart's sadness but never ending yearning for true love....Well done!

Eric

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2009-02-10 01:40 AM

you know I understand this well

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2009-02-10 07:20 AM

Dear Hope... this is beautiful.. I'm sending you some of my RDB

to warm your day...

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Rick Mordecon
Junior Member

since 2009-02-05

Posts 10
NYC, N.Y.

8 posted 2009-02-10 09:27 AM

hi hope,

i'm sure many of us know this feeling. thanks for sharing

Rick Mordecon

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

9 posted 2009-02-10 09:33 PM

That is a sad poignant post my dear but thank you for sharing. Love

Lindsay

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