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Rick Mordecon
Junior Member

since 2009-02-05

Posts 10
NYC, N.Y.

0 posted 2009-02-05 03:13 PM

DAWNING

In a cold place, some warmth.
In a dark place, a glimmer of light.
In a time of takers, in a new world of pariahs’s, an arrival of illumination.
In a room with 13 tables, arguments, passions, quill pens, and courage.

In a field of  others dreams, the nightmares of rope and chains.
In the sun, no shade, in the winter, pain and longing.
In a lanky, lovely, lonely man, a spark of  humanity that becomes a bonfire of revolution, maiming brothers, splitting rivers, dividing reason, then healing wounds with soft touch and hard loving.

Four score and then some later, self aware, the sunlight beckons us towards noon.
Dark forces evolve, rise up, are met, then lay down.
Science is unleashed on the world, and the spectacle of man’s leap into forever almost blinds ua.

In times of turmoil, a still voice is easiest to hear.
In a world of misunderstanding, a steady truth can meet any obstacle.
In a place of revolution, evolution.
In an eagle’s talon, an olive branch.

So much to think about at this moment.
This pushing, unyielding moment, calling us to a higher mind, a more perfect heart.
So much to think about with the sun in our eyes, the stars blocked out.
Still we know they are there.

If  a moment can be captured, let us set it free.
If an idea can catch fire, let’s help it to burn a steady truth.
If a nation can come together to better itself, let us in earnest begin this process.
For we are a nation of  process.
Let us now join together to begin a new process.
The process of becoming, the process of forgiving, the process of unfolding, the process of dawning.
Rick S. Mordecon

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2009-02-05 03:24 PM

Hello, Rick, and Welcome to Passions. It
appears that you are a serious thinker...

we like fellows like you.

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-02-05 07:02 PM

You have written a good piece of poetry, with this well rendered process of dawning, dear Rick.

Welcome to Pip!

Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2009-02-07 05:58 PM

"In times of turmoil, a still voice is easiest to hear.
In a world of misunderstanding, a steady truth can meet any obstacle.
In a place of revolution, evolution.
In an eagle’s talon, an olive branch."

Welcome to the blue pages.
With enlightened perceptive offerings like this, I will be sure to look for your writings often.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2009-02-07 06:42 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2009-02-08 12:38 PM

Substantially good...James

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2009-02-08 12:42 PM

Positive well meaning message Rick
Excellent poetic lines to express a hope.

Eric

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