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I'll miss the city
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I'll miss the city |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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I'll miss the city I am moving far away I want to erase my self And return to my old self I need to make better friends I wonder where my home is Nothing is keeping me here Some are not lucky like me. -Juju -Juju |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Juju, You're not going anywhere Hon. Don't go talking like that. Love Bobby |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Oh.... that's not a suicide poem... does it sound like a suicide poem? its not. -Juju -Juju |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I am also moving. To Winona... rural. And awesome. Great write, I related strongly. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
You’ll both be lonely as hell. No Juju, it doesn't sound like a suicide poem. I can't stand being away from the city more than a few hours. Bobby |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
You could be right. -Juju |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I like the thought this implies---fantasy or real, it is a dream to be so free, as if one is not bound to time and place, not so entrenched in a notion of self that can not changed. Best wishes, art |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there's no place like home, wherever that is this country life of mine isn't really home...mine will always be the city by the beach *hugs* |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
I miss the city. I miss the smell of stale urine on the sidwalks, I miss the filty streets and broken bottles, I miss that little dead tree that somebody planted, trying to bring a little country to their lonely life, I miss the sound of sirens going off every 7 minutes, I miss the 2 cars that were stolen right from in front of my appartment. (One of them I don't miss that much) I miss the old guy that used to sleep around the corner buy the trash bin, He got knifed and died, (I didn't know his name, I wish I did) I. . . . ya know, I really don't miss the city that much. Enjoy lifes adventures, Have fun with your move. WT. |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I left for college at 18, and moved a thousand mile away. I'm still on the move---discovery, adventure, renewal, and aging with reverence and grace. I enjoy your poetry. art |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I left for college at 18, and moved a thousand mile away. I'm still on the move---discovery, adventure, renewal, and aging with reverence and gratitude. "I wonder where my home is" This line reminds me of an old cliche---"Home is where the heart resides." I enjoy your poetry. art [This message has been edited by gilead (02-05-2009 05:41 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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