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gdcod2player Member
since 2008-07-26
Posts 117 |
Keep me looking out for you this summer Keep me waiting longer Your smile I’ve seen Mine has gone away Without you I’ve lost my place This book’s too long The pages seem to fill with you and your pretty face This book isn’t from my library The pages I haven’t finished yet I’ll read you a thousand times to feel your magic What’s wrong with something this rare? This book I’ve realized isn’t long enough |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If it were April or May, I would say that your book was a Year Book of a School that you are about to leave...or return to... but then, it reached farther than that... and became a tabloid of faces, with one outlined in gold... that is where this poem led me... I look forward to reading more. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I agree -Juju |
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