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Fair Rose
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Fair Rose |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
How can I show you what you mean to me? What acts convey, the feelings you set free, By just your glance, or slightest touch of skin, That burns as fire my soul within. A madrigal perchance, sweet hymn of passion's dance, A symphony, to sound forth our romance? Nay, no instrument could possibly convey, The bonds with which you hold me sway. Perhaps a portrait; your vibrancy imbued, For all to view, Fair Rose, your pulchritude, Alas, no mortal hand could paint thy face, To match sweet vision, of your beautous grace. Three simple words I'll say instead, I love you, no more need be said. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your "Fair Rose" is beautifully addressed here, dear Tim. Just lovely! Love, Margherita  |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
A beautifully written poem.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I always smile when you write these little beauties for your beauty. She's so lucky! |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Simply beautiful. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love you, no more need be said. When they're meant, those words say everything. *S* Lovely work! |
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