Poem About Someone Special...

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Open Poetry #44

Poem About Someone Special...

AlexG
Junior Member

since 2009-01-31

Posts 10

0 posted 2009-01-31 11:23 PM

I wish I had that, I guess I wish I had grown up with you
The little time we've spent together really made me happy
I don't know why I'm crying, I just am
You make me not want to be what I am
I don't know what it is about you, your siblings & your mother
But you make me feel different

This feeling is probably what I've been missing all of my life
When I felt alone, but I don't feel as alone anymore
I know I don't show it, but those simple tasks are so hard for me
and I envy that about you guys...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2009-01-31 11:30 PM

Hi, Alex! Welcome aboard the pip ship! I hope you enjoy sailing these pages of blue!

You have the ability to share your feelings and that is an integral part of a good poet. You pull the reader into your world and make them feel what you feel and see what you see.
I like the way you express yourself. It is honest, straight-forward ~ and real!

I look forward to learning more about you through your poetry!

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,
Earth Angel

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

2 posted 2009-02-01 08:38 AM

Hi Alex

Welcome

It's a warm feeling when we feel wanted.
We have all kinds of writers here at PIP.
Brand new and seasoned and all the in between.
When you feel sad and down. Write. It helps.
When you are happy write. It gives you a smile and WRITE just because.
Know one here will judge you unless you ask.

As I always say:" Write on and aim for the stars and eat CHOCOLATE.

Hugs
BonBon

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2009-02-01 09:04 AM

Yo AlexG,

This is a very good poem. Real friends make us feel the thoughts expressed in your poem.

Don't eat chocolate, it's bad for your teeth, it will make you fat, and it can destroy your mind.

Bobby

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2009-02-01 10:39 AM

elo!

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2009-02-01 11:31 PM

Welcome to PiP,

...an interesting, emotive write...good expression...

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