Open Poetry #44 |
Truth and Time |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Truth and Time A whistling Winter wind through bare branches Spring dew anointing the first cherry blossoms Summer rain striking dry clay Autumn leaves falling by moonlight in each of these … the voice of truth and time passing --- b. e. adams (1/31/2009) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes and each example you gave is just beautiful |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Phil saw his shadow this morning so maybe we'll need to settle for DREAMING of Spring. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
secondhanddreampoet - looking forward to spring coming, and winter passing, nice write... BC |
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WindWalker11 Junior Member
since 2008-12-24
Posts 41 |
This was very nice: I too am looking forward to the coming of Spring. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"The voice of truth" yes, dear Bruce, you listen and watch so intensely and bless us with your beautiful perceptions. Love, Margherita |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
The four seasons of earth, made transcendent in the mind of a gifted poet. I am there, present in body and spirit, feeling the wintry wind, beholding the cherry blossoms of spring, dancing like a kid in the summer rain, and listening to the crackle of the fallen leaves of autumn beneath my feet, as I stroll in the shadows of moonlight. All of this, this truth, revealed in the lines of an uncommon poem! Thanks for this joyful reading in a time of sweet sadness. art |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
The seasons come alive so beautifully here. A soothing balm against an icy winter for so many. Ida |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sadly beautiful |
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