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Blowing Smoke
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Blowing Smoke |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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He blew rings for me wrote my name on the sky a marquise of mixed letters with a cauldron of smoke that rose from his mouth his kiss of confetti flavored with sea salt and Benson & Hedges it was south of the boardwalk by the whirl of the carosel at the ocean's reception we were just turning 20. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Inkedgoddess, This is a lovely, lively poem. I'm still twenty. Love Bobby |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Thanks Bob 20 looks good on you  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
20 was good.... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - yes, 20 was good. Would love to go back... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I recall a moment quite similar to this but his was a bubblegum kiss! lol Love your writing, Goddess!   Linda |
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shelerella75 Member
since 2009-01-30
Posts 58 |
sweet, fun memory in a sweet and fun poem! I wouldn't go back to 20 myself, though!  |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
I love thinking back to those times when time was endless; and we can learn to be there still. However, blowing smoke has lost its charm over the years! I enjoy your writing. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inki...oh hell, just call me smoke...enjoyed it ms |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks guys and gals. darkman..i guess i had that remark coming huh |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hmmm, it's warm on this side of my screen. Must be the fire from all that blowing - smoke. A |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good one |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
20? Heck, I'll take forty! Ah, this is indeed a really fine poem, sweet and gently touching, and well crafted by the pen of the inkedgoddess.Best wishes, art |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I remember a time like this, myself. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michele - those were great times back then, miss them when I think of all those things I did over the years... BC |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
“He blew rings for me” Are you sure that wasn’t just the smoke from your fiery kiss Goddess? My lips are blistering from here. In a wonderful way of course. Your words linger on my mouth Michelle so sweetly. Richy |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"wrote my name on the sky a marquise of mixed letters with a cauldron of smoke that rose from his mouth" ...reminds me of my father (when smoking was far cooler) and how he would amaze my with his 'sky-writing' abilities. nice write...thanks for sharing... |
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