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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Unforgiving, she leaves behind a bitter sting of cold to linger in her wake and she alone holds control to immobilize all that stands within her path..... She rules with a vengeance, raging... swift and sharp breath cutting to the core where even raw emotion cannot bleed.... Some, would call her frigid, but still..........she laughs...... Cold hearted, though she might seem, she can still bless the day with golden rays in her gentle persuasion reminding one and all, now in more subtle whispers she calls.... never underestimate what cannot be seen... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I was here in the beginning, and shall be in the end, I can be your enemy or your friend... I am beauty, wisdom, and grace although you shall never see my face; you would know me by my name... I am a one, and only.... and still the same..... I am, I was, and always will be... never doubt the power that lies within me.... © Dmsmith "In yearning for nothing, you will be free to enjoy what you do, free to see the patterns, free to hear the music in all things." -Barbara Ann Kipfer |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 this rules Donna!! loved it! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thanx hon, I appreciate your being here today and reading. Yep, its been COLDDDDD here. LOL. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Yes,We forget where the real power lies sometimes and Gaia doesn't hesitate to remind us. You know her well. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Gentle Spirit, Wow, two poems at once. Very nice work. Bobby |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
excellent subject choice ... a most fine 'write'! MUCH applause!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - nice to read your words once again... BC |
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AlexG Junior Member
since 2009-01-31
Posts 10 |
very nice work... you really put words together beautifully. It sounds so poetic, lol... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, WOW ~ No, Double WOW WOW!!!!  I knew Kacy would love this! Please ask her to get up off her knees. She needs her rest! Seriously speaking, this rocks! Amazing write! Don't be such a stranger! Love you! Linda  |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
I loved this poem. Expertly crafted and encompassing the myriad aspects of the earth mother. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Double magic. *S* Beautiful work! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You have done Gaia proud, Donna. What a wonderful morning treat - and I am off to face the day with your poem(s) tucked in my pocket. Thank you. Love, A |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"swift and sharp breath cutting to the core where even raw emotion cannot bleed.... never underestimate what cannot be seen..." ...my favorite lines...and the ending segways so well into the second write |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Cold here too..... minus 24 yesterday morning. This is an excellent write and there's always beauty in that kind of power. Have to look for it and it appears. Eric |
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