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Open Poetry #44

Don Juan

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-12-31 04:28 PM

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Outside
The sun shines
On the last hours
Of the passing year

And I will say
To the next day

Oh yes
Your mother
I knew her well

.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-12-31 05:30 PM

Yo John,

Well, isn't that the truth.

Good work on this poem.

Bobby

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2009-01-03 08:48 PM

Enjoyed...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2009-01-03 10:15 PM

nicely done dear Poet!
Happy New Year to you John

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

4 posted 2009-01-04 05:07 AM

I love the short and sweet ones

Like it

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2009-01-04 03:47 PM

witty, i love it.

yann

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2009-01-04 06:39 PM

Ah yes, mother to the new year.....Sort of a thank you Don Juan for the good times....

Like it!

Eric

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

7 posted 2009-01-04 07:43 PM

Super witty.

Awesome.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2009-01-04 10:40 PM

a very befitting title...enjoyed, with smiles

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