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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Letters I could be writing to a friend instead of thinking about calling you knowing this call couldn’t go through as you’ve already gone ‘round the bend and my finger tips are slightly blue as winter caresses this shivering skin breaking tempers wearing thin and knowing this doesn’t matter to you but I thought of you today, and others as well and I could be writing to a friend who hasn’t yet gone ‘round the bend still, I cannot seem to let loose this spell as your voice echoes in this swell bringing along other voices to dwell. © krj 1-30-09 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hi Karilea, interesting rhyme formation but the words are true. It is never those we can reach that we try to, only those gone beyond recall. I guess it's a true saying 'you don't know what you've got till it's gone.' Anyway I rabbit - good poem. Keth Always do more than is required of you George Patton |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
So many precious ones that still seem so real through thier words and memories.....Lovely write. Take care Eric |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Nice one Karilea, enjoyed, love Lindsay |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very interesting! applause!! |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Karilea, this sounds kinda sad, But, is written very well. I so enjoy reading your poetry. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed the wistful, almost-defeated tone of this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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