Open Poetry #44 |
She Walks The Whispered Wind |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
She Walks The Whispered Wind By: Noah Eaton 1/28/09 . . . Far beyond the rainbow skies, where the gypsy sparrows swarm, shadows of a silent moon, evoke peach blossomed memories... . . . ...in this premise of dawn, I can hear the spirits weep, and I know there will come soft rains, in her vigils that we'll keep... . . . Oh, sing your tender mercy, in this bond of grief... ...know that waiting arms, are within a sunbeam's reach... ...I can hear her speak the rain's wisdom, I heard it halfway up the mountain, now I see her walk the whispered wind... . . . . . She sings her gossamer-drenched song, astride her horse of paint, in whispering winds, where gypsy swallows have flown... . . . oh, go oh oh, oh oh, as far as you dare to go, walk soft thundered knowing, we're holding on to letting go... . . . Oh, sing your tender mercy, in this bond of grief... ...know that waiting arms, are within a sunbeam's reach... ...I can hear her speak the rain's wisdom, I heard it halfway up the mountain, now I see her walk the whispered wind... . . . . . Each and every October moon, I can hear her chant yesterday's fragrance, as she keeps walking the whispered wind... . . . . . "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh Noah.. I have tears in my eyes.. this is such a beautiful gifting.. thank you my friend ... xx RDB xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a lovely tribute, Noah. Beautifully written. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Beautiful Noah, Thank you. latearrival |
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DharkOne Junior Member
since 2009-01-28
Posts 31 |
Most suitably read by candlelight with a glass of scotch at your side and the strings of the ancients lilting softly in the air.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Noah, this is you at your best. This flowed from your heart right into the hearts of your readers. Lyrical, melodious, 'beautimous' as Marge would say, soul-touching, enchanting ~ and full of love. I have missed you. Love & Margie Moon Light, Linda |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Noah... I'm without words. The entire presentation is spectacular. I would love to hear you sing this. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Noah, that was simply beautiful and yes, we will keep her close won't we? I am getting older too sweetie, and I could not see that font for the love of me, had to figure out how to enlarge it. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful write, Noah! Sometimes beautiful things make me sad. Helen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Noah, this is a fine lovely tribute for Marge. Good to read you again, poet. |
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Lisa Teller Junior Member
since 2009-01-27
Posts 11usa |
You are so Talented!I have always admired you poetic style Lisa teller aka (Lia fail) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
M'toe... I could just hug you... this is beautiful! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This touches the heart softly...James |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Lovely tribute Noah, but I'm not surprised, you're a great poet and Marge will never be forgotten, we can see her in so many things that surround us. Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Noah, this is Marge inside and out and, like her, beautiful inside and out. Owl |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah, I have missed you... This is so beautiful. Marge will be missed so much. Heart Hugs~Nancy |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Sharon, when they print in light colors I just scroll over it and it becomes white on darker blue so I can read it more easily. Works for me. I love the photos of your beautiful Canada but am not in the mood to be playing and making snow angels now. It has been Unseasonably cold here in Florida so if anyone is thinking of a warm place to be, it had better be a lot further south. LOL.We had a light frost but it was enough to wilt all my plants. They are lying on the ground in embarrassment. Can't prune until the danger is over and then we will be fighting the lack of rain. WE need that badly now also. |
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shelerella75 Member
since 2009-01-30
Posts 58 |
wow... that is just a lovely write! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"...I can hear her speak the rain's wisdom, I heard it halfway up the mountain, now I see her walk the whispered wind..." ...this is an exquisite stanza in such a lovely write...thank you for sharing this gem...it is indeed beautiful |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Noah, you touched my heart with this fine tribute. So very adequate and compassionate. Your love is felt deeply. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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