Open Poetry #44 |
Bones Is On The Wrong Side |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
There’s a supermarket here in the hood. It’s just down the street from where Bones lives. He walks down there to buy some stuff. Bones finds police cars in the parking lot. The place has been robbed. Inside the market, everyone’s excited and shocked. Bones, being Bones, wonders how much the robbers got away with. As he leaves the supermarket, Bones spits at one of the police cars. Bones knows that’s a wrong thing to do, but he can’t help himself. Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bobby - I find Bones just amazing... BC |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Bill, Bones is trying to do better in his attitude, but it's hard. Bobby |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
When life hands you a dirty deal then it's hard to control the emotions....Bones is hurt but still human. Eric |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Bones is the man. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Eric, You nailed it--he's still human. He's also, as an intelligent person, is somewhat embarrassed by his actions. Thanks for the kind words. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Paul, Don't do this in your hood. Bones remains ashamed of himself. It was a stupid thing to do. Bobby |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
shaking his head in disgust (because he still doesn't understand)...he still feels sorry for Bones, but I catch myself making that small, groaning sound anyway...nicely written as it puts me there... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Steavenr, For reading and commenting. Don't feel sorry for Bones, he's a very capable person. Bobby |
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