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Open Poetry #44

Let Me

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

0 posted 2009-01-28 08:33 AM

Let Me

Please let me hold you?
Let me sooth your growing pain
Everything you are to me
Is cleansed by the falling of the rain,

Let us think before we speak
Don't let sorrow shade your heart
Let the words be soft and gentle
Don't let anger drive us apart,

It only takes a moment
A fraction of precious time
To let me know that you love me
And know that you are mine,

Never leave words unspoken
Never hold an angry word
Negativity will destroy you
We need love in our world,

As I hold out my hand
And offer you my soul
Please carry it softly with you
Until the day we both grow old.

Annie.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-01-28 10:34 AM

Yo dear Annie,

Okay hon, you talked me into it.

This poem has some fairly good end rhymes.

Love Bobby

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

2 posted 2009-01-28 11:35 AM

Awww Bless Thank you Bobby

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

3 posted 2009-01-28 09:37 PM

It only takes a moment
A fraction of precious time
To let me know that you love me
And know that you are mine,

That is Beautiful and sooo True!
Very Very Nice Annie!!

Rich

Lisa Teller
Junior Member

since 2009-01-27

Posts 11
usa

4 posted 2009-01-28 11:29 PM

Love This!! My Kind of poetry. I enjoyed this very much.

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

5 posted 2009-01-29 04:24 AM

Thank you Both i am glad you liked it

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