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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

0 posted 2009-01-28 07:54 AM

it was almost immediatley after
your laughter in that bottle of momentary
and then I said I liked it too
and so you did more on purpose

like a bad girl acting up
but innocently play pretending
I guess it goes back to your eyes
and the smile I mentioned the first time

and how I would always wonder more
about the sound of your laughter
more than about any of your other charms
but you just smiled then too

as if you already knew I was a man lying
but wishing I could believe it myself
more than you did as you read my eyes
and said I shouldn't imagine those things

unless I imagined staying there forever

_____________

daark (circle of palms)

Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

1 posted 2009-01-28 08:19 AM

Interesting poem hints of a young girl turning into a women
Excellently written,

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2009-01-28 10:26 AM

as if you already knew I was a man lying
but wishing I could believe it myself
more than you did as you read my eyes
and said I shouldn't imagine those things

unless I imagined staying there forever

~*~

You know so much...and carry it well.

Dark Stranger
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Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2009-01-28 10:33 AM

ms annie..perhaps the young girl of a woman showing herself for a moment..thanks ms

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ms sun, thank you special lady friend...you bless me

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2009-01-28 11:10 AM

Wonderful post!

ARCTIC WIND

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2009-01-28 11:51 AM

Yo Dark Stranger,

I liked the title of this poem. It's a good play on words.

Bobby

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2009-01-29 04:17 PM

and said I shouldn't imagine those things

unless I imagined staying there forever

Trouble is... I keep imagining things that can't be... which leads to some incoherent sighing on my part... then wailing and gnashing of teeth. *G*

But this is beautiful work!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2009-01-30 08:02 AM

thanks bobby J

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ms suthern..yes..we all do that, myself so very much included..so I just ride the harley harder and faster..thanks

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2009-01-31 04:27 AM

quote:
it was almost immediatley after
your laughter in that bottle of momentary
and then I said I liked it too
and so you did more on purpose

like a bad girl acting up
but innocently play pretending
I guess it goes back to your eyes
and the smile I mentioned the first time

and how I would always wonder more
about the sound of your laughter
more than about any of your other charms
but you just smiled then too

as if you already knew I was a man lying
but wishing I could believe it myself
more than you did as you read my eyes
and said I shouldn't imagine those things

unless I imagined staying there forever

Sometimes, I am selfish and covet an entire poem. How can I single one line out as beautiful? They all touch me, so I'll carry them off to bed to wrap around my dreams tonight.

A

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2009-01-31 06:43 AM

ms ali-san...am glad you burrito'd it and
made snugly in it, thanks babe

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2009-01-31 11:14 AM

like a bad girl acting up
but innocently play pretending
I guess it goes back to your eyes
and the smile I mentioned the first time

and how I would always wonder more
about the sound of your laughter
more than about any of your other charms
but you just smiled then too
Its impossible to pick fav lines out of this one Dark, but I knew from the title I was going to love it.

Yes...I'm certain I've wondered just these same things a time or two in my life. *smile* And Im sure I will be wondering them again a time or two in my life.

NO body does sighed language like you do bigdaddy.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2009-01-31 03:47 PM

ms gs...thanks donna...you bless me babe

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

12 posted 2009-02-02 01:19 PM

quote:
and how I would always wonder more
about the sound of your laughter

What treasures I find today, after coming back!

There is such charm in laughter, especially in the laughter of lovers!

Sigh provoking language I would say!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

13 posted 2009-02-02 02:21 PM

ms mar..it is always a smile to have your eyes on my pen, thank you

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

14 posted 2009-05-16 01:48 AM

I love this poem.

A

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

15 posted 2009-05-16 07:01 AM

ms ali-san, thanks babe

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