Open Poetry #44 |
Seraphic |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Hello everyone, I'd like to greet you all warmly. This is my first time posting in open, I'm usually a dark poet, so here goes. The moon plays a silent melody upon her luminescent skin Glistening softly beneath the silver falls Water flows in crystal rivulets down the smooth curve of her back And shines wetly in her flowing locks She steps nimbly down into the tranquil rock pool With pristine river pearl in hand Her slight form only accentuates her naked breathless beauty As she lifts her voice in siren song All creation gathers to her soaring melody Both hunter and quarry sit at peace Her voice is the swirling cadence of the endless river The cycle which enfolds all life Where have you come from o gentle goddess? Should not you be atop a marble spire? Dreaming in seraphic bliss amidst starlight? Far from a weeping world? Her almond eyes widen in surprise at my question As her perfect lips begin to frame words As the whispering leaves speak the name of the river goddess She replies 'Why, the true heaven is here on earth' Dedicated to Shannon, my beloved. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lucky Shannon. Welcome to the site, Suncleaver. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, there, SunCleaver! What a lovely song for a seraphic siren! Beautiful penning of adore! Your Shannon sounds divine! ~ and I love her name! I chose it for my daughter! Smiles across the miles! Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Suncleaver, There you go. I like it. "Suncleaver would a wooing go." This poem has some life to it. Bobby |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kewl moves luke...enjoyed it |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WELCOME TO PIP ARCTIC WIND |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Thank you all very much. I've been participating in the Dark Poetry section of this site for a short while now but lately have felt the urge to pen more romantic musings. Smiles, hugs and love from Luke. |
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