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Forbidden Fruit |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. So now We know It doesn’t seem All that long ago We’d pass one another Hardly with a smile Perhaps We became A little too close Learning of each A little too much As made this kiss Inevitable despite It all I no more Than you Have any idea What tomorrow Will bring except It’s impossible To put the apple Back on the tree . |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I like this piece very much, John. That ending is superb. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Sometimes the closer you get, the more you wish you hadn't. But you can't know that til you do, so it's still a positive. I like the phrasing in this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Excellent! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Some fine poertry and wisdom here, John. Ida |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
True dat -Juju |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
true sagery, dear sir...wisdom in weighted words...nicely done |
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