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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-01-26 08:26 AM

it was always the billboards before
that were my lovers on different highways
with their special curves and dead ends
that seemed to fit my leather
better than the saliva of their tattoos

I always knew they would meet too someday
within the same sunset somewhere in vegas
and then she double parked her sigh ways
in some parking lot on maybe so & no way
where she wore a smile in long time sleeves

and asked if I wanted to go down to small talk
and tell her all about the stranger of me
just as a friend talking to a friend
stringless like topless to a blinded man
and she was that kind of statue lovely

even when her leaving was too quickly
an autumn in my favorite endless summer
but she did give me back the highways again
and little secrets about behind the signs
where the view was still worth stopping for

though her lipstick was made from splinters

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daark

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2009-01-26 08:48 AM

bitter sweet sighs thighs and moans
fill in the blanks of your mysterious
miles of highway muse

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

2 posted 2009-01-26 09:16 AM

Excellent poem..
Very well penned

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2009-01-26 10:03 AM

ms inky...thanks babe

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annieP, thanks ms

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2009-01-26 11:26 AM

Nicely done Dark Stranger,
mystery has it's ways ..

ARCTIC WIND

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2009-01-26 11:41 AM

"she double parked her sigh ways"
You always gift us with an insightful original line. Enjoyed.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2009-01-26 02:25 PM

hey stranger, still better than ever

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2009-01-26 02:30 PM

aw..thanks amigo!!

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ms midnite, thank you so much

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ms g..thank you stranger

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2009-01-26 04:25 PM

Now, that's a nice pane...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2009-01-26 04:58 PM

thanks ms sun, you always bless me

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

10 posted 2009-01-26 10:18 PM

"she double parked her sigh ways
in some parking lot on maybe so & no way"

...fabulously creative line...superbly done...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2009-01-27 06:22 AM

thanks steavenr....I appreciate you

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2009-02-06 09:34 AM

and asked if I wanted to go down to small talk
and tell her all about the stranger of me
just as a friend talking to a friend

I was captivated by so many lines... the ones steavenr highlighted are pure magic. *S* But for me, these are the seduction... the chance we have to take even if we end up picking out splinters. *S*

Fantastic write! *S* Into my library it goes. *S*

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