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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Each year Is a brief affair She stands At the door For one last time Her long wool coat Now buttoned up Against The cold outside There are Occasions Such as these When only the eyes Can speak for hearts The final glance a gaze Adieu my love As you disappear Forget-me-nots In your hair . |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When only the eyes Can speak for hearts The final glance a gaze It's been almost *why number the months when it seems like forever* since my last such gaze-that-says-everything. *sigh* I hope your wait isn't nearly as long! I love this soft, romantic write! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful metaphor, years and girls, must think about it...May be some crush could happen with 2009. Thank you for the poem. yann |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Excellent 'penning'! I am especially fond of the ending: "There are Occasions Such as these When only the eyes Can speak for hearts The final glance a gaze Adieu my love As you disappear Forget-me-nots In your hair" Grand impressionistic Romanticism! MUCH applause!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Huan Yi - enjoyed your writing... BC |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Your poetry touches me with regrets. A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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