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mirror mirror I'm a'twitch
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mirror mirror I'm a'twitch |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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twitch I do not fit in these clothes that once belonged to me *twitch* I'm thinking different thoughts stuff they told me I should not twitch a g'damnned reckoning rough I hit the ground and throb zzzzzzzztwitch! I am the second string quarterback who once was robbed... Last and fair the last despair spirals that pass Hail M'ray twitch I am alone at last with zilch and nothing left to say but monotones and droolings and stories told with some coke-zing; I am the fool that I laughed at with great hair and the queendom that I swallowed with an olive, speared watching me alone. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you are true beauty within the path going and has been felt the words sting of fault cried tears to pillar salt turned to see path taken a promise made not forsaken yet, there lies dreams unspoken you now bend remain unbroken and soon comes when you will soar NO ONE takes that you are so much more |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Karen, your poem (as always) is so rich with meaning, art, sensitivity, innuendos and intellect, and Helen, what an outstanding, understanding (in both senses of the word), beautiful, appreciative, (and in my humble opinion, accurate) interpretation/tribute of/to both Karen's poem and Karen! And Karen, you are NEVER alone. For a start, you have a great following and huge bunch of friends here in Pip! Wowweee! Owl |
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woodtic Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 87 |
Hey! Pull back from lies we tell ourselves when we despise the mirror. Reflections' tricky light we see more clearly with our eyes shut tight. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*grins* |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sometimes we just need to buy new clothes. I prefer retro, slightly loved clothes.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Ouuu I love a good read, now this Charmed One brings you to the table! It's full of meaning indeed! I can totally understand the feeling you have written between the lines, or shall I say, in the lines pretty much  You described it puurfectly  to you Charmed oneARCTIC WIND |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Great write, Karen, and, if the truth be know, we all know about the "twitch"... and just when we think we've got rid of it, back it comes. What a life! Helen |
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turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
Hi Serenity, A twitch, an itch, a paradigm of platitude.... I can relate. Turtle |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A double treat! *S* Two dynamite writes! There's no way I can come close to Helen's eloquence... but K, dear one... I think that mirror needs a permanent dip in the mighty Mississipp' if'n it can't show you your beauty... or the cadre' of friends standing by. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Well, twitch your way back to the top, baby. This is some writing! A |
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