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Open Poetry #44

Innardscorn

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2009-01-22 06:51 PM

Beware of them who do not mourn
for they have swallowed bitter seed
that will tear their innardscorn
and ripen into bad fruit trees.

Keep watchful eye on the dry orbs
that do not have the sense to cry--
those eyes were mine and twice forlorn;
and oh forgive me--I was blind.

Them whose tummies are so swelled
from swallowing their fears, I'll pray
they will learn to feed themselves
and live to learn another way.

My silences make much more sense
than any logic disciplined;
and I am now open-broken--
I place the pieces mosaic.

Unless you're lost you can't be found.
Go too high? You'll love the ground.
Kissing terra firma, bruised -
beware of them professing truth.

It's individual.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-01-22 08:01 PM

Yo dear Serenity blaze,

Indeed, truth is individual. This is nice work.

Love Bobby

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2009-01-22 10:33 PM

nice write...I love this phrase:

"I am now open-broken" ...cool word usage

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2009-01-23 04:38 PM

I can't even begin to document all the ways my mind went as I read this... It zipped from times when my eyes seemed to never dry to the Declaration of Independence... which should give you a glimpse of the scope. *S*

And yet I find myself back at the first thought that formed... WOW!!!!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2009-01-27 03:27 PM

I love your "individual truth", Karen.
Ida

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2009-01-27 09:49 PM

Do you know how much I love this? Well..........................................................a whole lotta bunches!! jojo

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