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| Open Poetry #44 |
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time shirt sleeveless |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I began watching time more closely like it was a string in the wind by the morning of your windows but you didn't bother me too often dressed in your hurry place gowns the long and slender ones in velvet that were always othering in directions but were touching my shadows with silly somone spilled imagination on my shirt so I wore it more often like a wishing well with sleeves that were always handy to be just handy if you wanted handfuls or poems in plastic bags without ribbons that you could store in the garage next to a dusty mansound memory machine that only needed to be started sometimes to make you look for sheet music dreams again _____________________ daark (circle of palms) |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
amazing |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick..I wonder if that is what her name really means..thanks lady friend |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...Someone sure did spill imagination on your shirt, then washed it in imagery and dried it in the sun, in a yard where words grow. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
...this is so rich...I knew it was yours from just the title...it is so you-ish  ...fell in love with this stanza: "someone spilled imagination on my shirt so I wore it more often like a wishing well with sleeves that were always handy to be just handy if you wanted handfuls" ...I have one of those shirts...I would wear it everyday if life would let me... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie...thanks little neighbor...sure is a pleasure to see your eyes here. _____________ steavenr, thanks guy...I would wear it slow, often myself I suspect..in day dreams anyway. |
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nebulous_nymph Junior Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 37Inertia |
yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms nymph...thank you for the touch babe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Now, I'm liking this song! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...would love to watch you play with your eyes closed smiling, thanks lady friend |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Overwhelmingly exquisite and creative! I adore this series. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..thanks to you ms...I do enjoy it also. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Each line flows like water - waterfall water that skims lightly over rocks and sprays beauty over all who pause to admire. A |
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americangothic Junior Member
since 2008-11-11
Posts 45 |
I enjoyed reading this piece.....beautiful and wildly imaginative |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe _________________ americanG..thanks so much |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
somone spilled imagination on my shirt so I wore it more often like a wishing well with sleeves that were always handy to be just handy if you wanted handfuls I knew I was in for a treat from the title... but this is pure magic. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks suthern..you smile me deeply |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
As everyone else has stated ... these lines earn history in their script ----- ---------------------------------------------- somone spilled imagination on my shirt so I wore it more often like a wishing well ---------------------------------------------- Well done poet of the west sun. |
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