Open Poetry #44 |
Pale Din Resonation |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Pale Din Resonation The penning of silence ceases Attuned to the anticipatory boldness of new time Weathered against the frozen husk of winter All of life akin in the masquerade and majesty As if astounded, the shock of frozen rivers thaw Momentary, as a flake in nonchalance Moving slowly away from pause, taking merit Taking mask away, the icy stare of a cold clue Just a glimpse of solemnity, for underneath the frozen waters Courses new life, speed and spirit of a higher knowing Regeneration continues on in flowing This is the time of deepest relevance Earthly elegance, against the backdrop of January Soon Copyright Kkh 12/30/08 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As per usual, I was in a dilemma as to which lines to quote from all those great ones!!! I settled on the following ~ "Just a glimpse of solemnity, for underneath the frozen waters Courses new life, speed and spirit of a higher knowing" TD, you are a poetess of eloquence and grace! ~ and may the coming new year be one of calming peace, prosperity, and joy! Warm hug, EA |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I agree with Linda on the quote and find this to be and absolutely stunning write, Kathleen. Beautiful. Ida |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautifully illustrating that even mother nature uses a face cream now and then to revitalize her elegance. Love the theme, love the write. Well done. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - another great write, deeply intense, and enjoyed reading... BC |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you have to be one of my favorite wordsmiths...just love what you do with words in their sequences...like these two beautiful examples: "a flake in nonchalance" "the icy stare of a cold clue" |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
TD, Beautiful. Alison |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
As beautiful as ever Kathleen, this was magical! Merry New Year wonderful poet! |
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