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Bladecatcher Junior Member
since 2008-11-25
Posts 15 |
Dusky midnight colors strain through cheap satin curtains. Their moonlight rays, diluted but still beautiful, illuminate a naked figure on a twin mattress, providing light yet witholding comfort. The sojorn face rests blanketed by a muted glow like a thousand purple fireflies placid expression softly overcast by the thoughtfully muted embers of their otherwise fiery cores These serene features lay untroubled by the solidarity of day; this night, the sleeper rests. [This message has been edited by Bladecatcher (01-20-2009 05:56 AM).] |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Beautiful words excellently written I loved this poem and the way you told the story |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."providing light yet witholding comfort"... What a powerful verse! Quite a write, and this really stood out on it's own. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice to welcome you to PiP, and loved the vividness of the imagery in this write...a cinematic journey here...enjoyed |
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