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Open Poetry #44

Intangerine. (Repost.)

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-01-20 03:25 AM

I take hold of you,
the intangerine, in both hands
and take a deep bite.

Tastes like happiness.
Tastes like female.
Like I imagine you would taste,
if you were feeling quite citrus.

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Jimbeaux reminded me that this existed, this was probably the first legitimate poem that I'd ever written.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

[This message has been edited by viking_metal (01-20-2009 11:26 AM).]

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-01-20 08:47 AM

Paul,

This is a nice little poem.

Bobby

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