Open Poetry #44 |
Rushing Life Away |
GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Getting dizzy with frustration My head’s spinning with aggravation Rush through the day, rushing away Gathering heat from the urgency Confusion like a panicked emergency Hurrying through life, hurrying with strife Recollecting thoughts and sense Why speed until our deaths commence Slow down the pace, enjoy this place |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Wise words excellently written I loved this poem and the way you told the story.. |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
The meter needs some tightening but the rhymes are solid and the message excellent Carpe Diem! Mark |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
GothicCherry - I liked this indeed. If we rush thru life, forget about smelling any roses. Crafted well. Namyh |
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