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Afterglow
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Afterglow |
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Burk28 Member
since 2009-01-08
Posts 80Michigan USA |
Afterglow, end of day, Dusk setting in mystery Lamentation for waning eve Where “Tomorrow” is but a dream An ethereal what if wonderland Filled with chorus of prairie wind song Blowing about the corridors of my mind Futuristic embolisms bursting forth And revealing blood’s Salty invigorations… Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
this is very good! it gives me a pleasant feeling..."kinda like aqua velva for my soul". |
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Burk28 Member
since 2009-01-08
Posts 80Michigan USA |
LOL aqua velva,,, thank s very much Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
There's a lot of neat metaphors in this piece. Eric |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Beautiful write...especially loved this line: "Futuristic embolisms bursting forth" powerful images created here... |
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Burk28 Member
since 2009-01-08
Posts 80Michigan USA |
Steavenr thanks very much Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self |
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Burk28 Member
since 2009-01-08
Posts 80Michigan USA |
James and ethome, thank you Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self |
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