Open Poetry #44 |
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Loving Dreams Transpired |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia ![]() |
![]() Loving Dreams Transpired Those times wishful thinking Our minds would pursue Both having shared dreams As our imagination grew With the keys to imagination We became two of a kind Where our wishes revealed Thoughts from our mind We conveyed shore to shore In like minded imagination While creative juices flowed To our dream destination As loving dreams transpired Upon the flights of fantasy Imagination travelled where Our minds wanted to be HopeĀ©2009 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hope.. you always know how to bring forth a smile.. ![]() love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Roniece for you kind reply and sharing smiles across the miles Hope |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Hope, this was so amazing, how many times I've felt these exact feelings. Wonderful! Richy ![]() |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
HopeS - at times those dreams do come true. Nice write with graphics... BC |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is just beautiful, and I feel like each stanza supports each other so well...it is good all the way through...long and sustained applause while standing can be heard for miles and miles...yes, into the sunset, and through the imagination...lovely craftsmanship...nice write |
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