Open Poetry #44 |
I held you close so you could scream (for Marge) |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Dedicated to our beloved poet and friend, Marge Tindal... Even through my own deluge of tears I saw and felt the intensity of your pain. So many tears, I felt we stood in icy pouring rain. Pain pouring from your wounded heart, your once comfortable world, suddenly ripped apart. And you say you don't know which way to turn to try to mend the deep tears of your soul, So you reach for that elusive goal of peace in solitude. Not wanting anyone to try and comfort you. The hurt is much too deep... no hands could ever reach inside where you believe you should hide from the sight of daylight and sunshine. And so you say you just want everyone to go away. But I reached out and touched your hand anyway, and felt a charge of energy so grand it sent a spark of hope, a glimpse of a new day on the horizon. I held you close, so you could scream. ~This was first posted Oct 15, 2001, Open Forum 16~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Kacy, this is so intensely sensitive and beautiful, it touches my heart deeply. You are both such wonderful souls. Exquisite! Hugs to both of you ((((Kacy and Marge)))) Love, Margherita |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the laying of hands from near or far brings hope |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
((((((Kacy)))))) ((((((Marge))))))) Just aren't any words.......jo |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is so deep, I'm fed up some days with selfishness.... wishes to stacy and Marge yann |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kacy, a beautiful tribute to a very strong woman. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a grand-fine tribute from one 'strong' spirit to another! May both be healed! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Kacy, this is so very, very like both you and Marge - good, pure, powerful, striking, inspirational and absolutely beautiful within and without (yes, the poem, within and without, too - the within being the content, and the without being the aesthetics and the art). Thank you so much for this. And what a wonderful, wonderful gift for our beloved Marge! Thank you, thank you, thank you. Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The title itself was a 'hanky alert' ~ so I knew what I was going to be in for! ~ Emotionally, as well as poetically. Kacy and Marge. Marge and Kacy. ~ Two divine poetesses ~ with each one radiating her own extraordinarily bright Light out into the world. You are both beloved members of our "Family of Friends". Love & Everlasting Spirit Light, Linda |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Kacy, this is such a beautiful tribute to our dearest friend, Marge. And, you my friend, are pretty special yourself. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanking each of you for enfolding our Marge within loving arms. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is patently insightful...such a pleasure to read...a worthy tribute...it is timeless...thank you for sharing |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine thoughts and written word...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful, wonderful xxx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you for this.I think giving permission to show anger or helplessness at a time like this is sometimes needed. We can not be so strong all the time. We are but human. And Kacy, I touch your hand and give you that same permission. Stamp your feet, hit the wall or scream, throw away the pillow that holds it in and just bello once or twice.. I hear you, and I admire you. love to you both,late' |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
From one lovely soul, to another. So heartwarming! Richy |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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WindWalker11 Junior Member
since 2008-12-24
Posts 41 |
I must agree with secondhanddreampoet: "a grand-fine tribute from one 'strong' spirit to another!" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks to all for keeping Marge in your thoughts and prayers. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kacy...I read this a few days ago and had no words to reply...they are still not the right ones. I think you know anyway. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your critique says to let you know if this hits in the solar plexus. It did. Hugs to you, dear lady... YOU are in my prayers, too. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, Martie...I do know you understand, and also know how deeply you care for our poet Marge. I thank you always, for your kind words and thoughts for me as well. Hope everyone is well and happy at your home. Suthern, thank you...so very much for your reply, and your kind healing thoughts. All of this positive healing energy does get through to the grateful recipients. |
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