with big croutons - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #44

with big croutons

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2008-12-30 04:05 AM

If there were a gathering
stripes
of anniversary
in the cold sharp agony
of nipples
muttering
the rings

so summer greens
and protocol:
"Give to her my calling card"
as I run the brambling
of every berry bursting me
and the grit of my last seed

halo's and the last boot went
to Cinderella and her bent
sources of the needled noon

on the basement

steps again

where I am

oh where i've been

salad dressed

with

big croutons

of wonder

if

I do belong

on my knees

in detriment

closing both my lidded eyes

so I will not see a thing.

* * *

Dread the damsel non-distressed

with every definition whet

for the appetite of spine

connecting dots of dirt as mine

singular

as that third eye

waiting for a spark of less

drowning in my spirals

I'm

loving you again.

* * *

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2008-12-30 06:23 AM

as that third eye

waiting for a spark of less

drowning in my spirals

I'm

loving you again.

~*~

You're standing in my mirror again, lovey.

Love you!

K

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

2 posted 2008-12-30 03:08 PM

Pretty cool write...enjoyed.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2008-12-30 04:42 PM

Sometimes your words are a vacuum... drawing me in, robbing my breath.

And reading your ending lines, I know I wouldn't have it any other way... who needs to breathe? *S*

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2009-01-01 06:39 PM

Is it to banal to just say ...

Wow!

?

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.