Open Poetry #44 |
Me And You... And You And Me |
Heart Shots Junior Member
since 2009-01-16
Posts 11 |
It was our first date on halloween, to see ghosts, goblins, and scary things. You held my hand and I squeezed you tight, hoping you'd keep me safe that night. We talked and laughed the whole night through, and I just couldn't take my eyes off you. I knew right away that it was meant to be, just me and you... and you and me. We have something special that is rare and true, and you made it all possible by just being you. As we walk through life's journey hand in hand, right by your side is where I will stand. From the very begining you had my whole heart, there is no finish line only the start. I love you's are said day and night, and heart to heart it shows us light. Your in my dreams and thoughts each day, and in your arms is where I'll stay. Show me forever with love strong and true, Yes Den, forever, is how long I'll love you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem of love is absolutely precious!!!! ~ and it reads so lyrically! "From the very begining you had my whole heart, there is no finish line only the start" ~ Big smiley face for those lines!!! This is a fine debuting poem! Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Love and togetherness beautifully expressed Hope |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"We have something special that is rare and true, and you made it all possible by just being you. As we walk through life's journey hand in hand, right by your side is where I will stand" wonderful first post Welcome to Pip! |
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Heart Shots Junior Member
since 2009-01-16
Posts 11 |
EA, Hope, Sunshine, and SEA, Thank each of you for your kind words and welcoming me into your circle of friends. It seems like a real nice place to be. Think I may pull up a chair and stay for a while. Thank you all again! |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Heart Shots, that's one fine piece or writing I've found the first two stanzas especially effective, they brought back lots of memories. Mark |
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sarah 45 Member
since 2008-12-19
Posts 54 |
Such a beautiful honest feelings expressed in the cutest way nice |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
this is such a lovely poem! Welcome to our pages blue.. I hope you read more of your beautiful work... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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