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SHADOWS
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SHADOWS |
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sarah 45 Member
since 2008-12-19
Posts 54 |
I look at these shadows I'm living with now some of them away, some of them are not, some alive forget the reason I don't know how People you can barely call humans,for they have lost that something inside but they still manage to walk and talk as if everything is alright but if you look deep enough they've lost their life they say HI, they say Bye they laugh and theu cry they own these shallow hearts that keeps on beating life away they forgat about what counts, and how to live the day they breath every moment closer to their death they talk only about life but the truth has already been said some shadows still remain deep in my thoughts for people who lived and knew the real cause they knew how to turn you upside down they knew how to bring life to what have drowned they did say Hi and Bye as well as they did laugh and cry but unlike others none of them didn't know why so their loss is ,a loss and life is such a big lie Although it's weird and sounds untrue although I'm lost in most of the times, sometimes I really know what to do But even if I did I'm still caught up in the middle and I keep on going down to fall in the same trap in every day I wake up my life seems to get further even more everything seems so hard and so different and I don't recognise anything anymore Now, though it's so not often, but sometimes it does actually happens I see a bit of hope in the faces of people I know and love And it's true that I can say they give such a hard time but for them I change my mind in this darkened night cuz, somehow I don't know how they give me a lil bit of light to never become one of those living dead shadows to always try to make it through my worst fears and sorrows ....... |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
This is a very interesting poem It seems to really come strait from your hart Thank you for sharing this part of you..  |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
left a comment on your post, "when your gone". i enjoyed this poem, too. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sarah, on reading this deep poem, it is apparent to me that you most definitely are not one of those shallow, shadowed people. My favourite line in your thought-provoking poem is the following ~ "I see a bit of hope in the faces of people I know and love"  Giving you a warm hug, Earth Angel  |
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sarah 45 Member
since 2008-12-19
Posts 54 |
Annie, thanks alot, most appreciated always... r v wooo thanQ too 4 reading both of them, actually I was just reading 1 of ur own... Earth angel; I'm tryin' not to be 1 of those shadowed people so thanks alot, Giving you a warm hug to you too thanks to you all again.... T.C |
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Yousha.S Junior Member
since 2009-01-16
Posts 10 |
This is a very nice poem ,I liked it very mush....... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo sarah 45, Look in the mirror. You are one of us too. Bobby |
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sarah 45 Member
since 2008-12-19
Posts 54 |
Thanks alot bobby, it's an honor seriously thankQ again... T.C |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
interestingly deep...and welcome aboard -- life's train leaves the depot shortly...sounds like you found the schedule...nice write |
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