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You Steal My Heart
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You Steal My Heart |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"unfulfilled am I to not entwine with your softness humbled I bow before you, for you steal my heart”  just so completely romantic |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such tremendous tenderness, dear Bill! You do have a never ending well of inspiration and love to explore. Beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, This is an interesting, and very possible couple. Bobby |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Love and longing so beautifully expressed with such tenderness Hope |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
interesting poem and presentation...thank you for sharing, bill. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Bill, this is beautiful work and quite romantic too...I'm glad sharing it even lately. regards yann |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Bill Charles.. I like your work very much! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful words of romance and the pic too is outstanding and fits so well. Eric |
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Sharon Rose Member
since 2008-11-03
Posts 51 |
Bill I was entwined with every word, well done. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bill, this is gorgeous! You really have put this together artistically ~ and ever so poetically. This is wonderful! You're really getting good at presenting your poetry! I LOVE this one ~ in content and form! Big hug for this "Beauty", Linda |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
This is beautiful...an un-Earthliness about it...almost a mystical magic adorns it...nice, very nice |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i liked the dark and the light to this and the big bill heart throughout it |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Bill, I know this feeling all too well. Poet you rock! Loved it! Richy |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Fine romantic write, Bill. Ida |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Always the romantic.  Well done Bill Hugs~Nancy |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wanted to thank everyone for reading this write, and for the most gracious replies. When I read them it gives me a lot of inspiration to write on. Thank you all again, it's deeply appreciated... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill I have read it over and over and the last paragraph blew me away. Many memories put into longing soulful words. Ariana |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
James - thanks again for coming by to read one of my writings... Vandana - glad you liked this writing... Ariana - thanks for stopping by to read my writing. I also noticed the more I read this one, the more meaningful it becomes perhaps due to memories past... BC |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Bill, this is touching and beautiful, as always Mark |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is so lovely! ARCTIC WIND |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
She's stolen a treasure then. *S* Beautiful write of romance! *S* |
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