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georgek
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0 posted 2009-06-07 12:58 PM



What is there to love, but the grey or the day?
To awake from pain to a lover's grave
All torn and sworn and hospice worn

As to say:- "I love" is to wane out the day,
That men grow old, who adorn what's grey,
More tired by some, who love all day,

Not knowing the sun, or the time of day.
Lest they speak of love, to know the hate

To love what's old all battered and slain,
To cry in vain, for all the pain
For rich or poor, whatever they pay

To love thy neighbour's empty plate
Despite their grief and solemn fate
We pray once more for their lack of taste

Knowing not their names or coloured traits
We sit at home with all our treats
And wonder who has lost their feet
In case we die at home with all our grief

Instead we 'pray' that we may speak
So others too may hear our plea
As to care for those we do not know

To love their heart and dear old soul
As they die alone where no one knows
Their lives, knives and palat strives
All neat and strewn where no one knew
Except for us, who know their homes
Deep inside our tumoiled hearts.
That we may reap and live our lives.


Glory be to God on high
Who sees our woumds and hear our passive tunes.
All murmered sweet, with soured foods
Suffering be, our way of life
As to scorn the clay, the mould and the hay
We awake once more...to a brand new day.


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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2009-06-07 06:16 PM


This is deeply moving, and eludes to profound loneliness that has transgressed beyond bitter tears and old age.

Very sad to read,  it is difficult not to feel empathy within your words.

Welcome~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2009-06-07 08:16 PM


"Instead, we pray"...

Amen to the gift of that gift.

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georgek
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since 2009-06-07
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3 posted 2009-06-07 08:24 PM


Tears for a broken pen is more than a worn pencil....

Old men fade as we cry for the young.

Best forgotten,unless we cry for an open grave,should they both die?


georgek
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4 posted 2009-06-07 08:26 PM


Thank you both for your welcome
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