Open Poetry #44 |
My Love |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
My Love When you and God get together and decide upon a reasonable date come to me my precious darling, come into my arms my special friend, my beautiful lover, my life, my love... JamesLee 06June 2009 |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo James, This is a lovely love poem. Good work. Bobby |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
the ... at the end feels like unspoken emotions. good write. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
She certainly sounds like something special James, I wish you luck. Lindsay |
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