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Open Poetry #44

Way Out of Place

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-06-06 10:41 PM

Way Out of Place

When the woman that
I love is close to me
I feel like this World
is a most beautiful place.

When she's far away,
from my sight
from my touch,
I feel like
the woman that I dearly
and sincerely love and miss
is way out of place.

JamesLee
05June
2009

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

1 posted 2009-06-06 10:43 PM

Beautiful.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-06-06 11:10 PM

Yo James,

What you say is true.

This is very good work.

Bobby

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2009-06-07 08:48 AM

James - nice thoughts, very nice thoughts...

BC

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

4 posted 2009-06-07 07:49 PM

I got goosebumps after reading this! This is really very sweet... =)

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