Open Poetry #44 |
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blush of sakugawa |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
and after your gravel has splintered softly like slow warm lingering palms on wind would you still seek the man room of my arms even though you didn't believe in magic if there were no assurances of tomorrow or of the windows that you worshiped being really the kind of glass that listened and not the kind that was brittle lipped would you just use the soft slip on shoes of a woman skin heart side sofa song and try on the warm glisten experiences that can't help but heal even your stones the ropes would never mark the sand of you nor leave painful where laughter had been but you would have to bring your dove sounds and let the girl of you know the woman of you without fence tattoos on fragile thighways _____________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You are on a roll, dear D.! When we can combine the playful aspects of the girl inside with the awareness of the woman who knows her power, then we are complete and can give and take what is expected and offered. Love, Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry just rolls off the tongue and races the wind at the same time. This is just so pretty, if I had to pick I would pick your first verse, but you know I love it all!! Don't you?! ![]() Hugs you~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend for the touch here.. ______________ ms bluezy..thanks babe, especially for the hugs.. |
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