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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-06-05 10:04 AM


and after your gravel has splintered softly
like slow warm lingering palms on wind
would you still seek the man room of my arms
even though you didn't believe in magic

if there were no assurances of tomorrow
or of the windows that you worshiped
being really the kind of glass that listened
and not the kind that was brittle lipped

would you just use the soft slip on shoes
of a woman skin heart side sofa song
and try on the warm glisten experiences
that can't help but heal even your stones

the ropes would never mark the sand of you
nor leave painful where laughter had been
but you would have to bring your dove sounds
and let the girl of you know the woman of you

without fence tattoos on fragile thighways


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daark




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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-06-05 11:19 AM


quote:
but you would have to bring your dove sounds
and let the girl of you know the woman of you

without fence tattoos on fragile thighways



You are on a roll, dear D.! When we can combine the playful aspects of the girl inside with the awareness of the woman who knows her power, then we are complete and  can give and take what is expected and offered.

Love,
Margherita

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2009-06-05 11:31 AM


Your poetry just rolls off the tongue and races the wind at the same time.  

This is just so pretty, if I had to pick I would pick your first verse, but you know I love it all!!  Don't you?!  

Hugs you~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2009-06-05 12:55 PM


ms mar, thanks lady friend for the touch here..

______________

ms bluezy..thanks babe, especially for the hugs..

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