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Early Morning Thoughts |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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The battle of words through quiet thoughts, a victim of tender memories. Behind the clouds lies the rainbow's end, on the shores of a life to appease. Promises are gone with the losing of self, and the need to interpret each day As one ventures outside from the inside of thoughts, a journey in passive display. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A very interesting write, lady M, one I shall re-read again after my morning garden session. It isn't raining this morning (yet) and I have three or four things to plant.  Have a great day! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It's raining down this way and I have "field day" with 5 year olds in about an hour... Thank you, enjoy your planting time.  M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hope the little ones like rain play! Field day with 5 year olds. WHAT FUN! I remember doing that routine once a month (as a parent volunteer) when I had a part time job teaching/supervising all grades in a computer lab at an elementary school in California. Growing up, I always played in the rain, got soaking wet making mud pies. My mother used to lock me outside, made me change clothes before coming back in the house. LOL. I still play in the dirt even on wet days, but only when it's lightly sprinkling, not in serious downpours. Yes, there is always mud under these fingernails, even when I wear gloves it seems to find my nails. Maybe it's those well worn holes in the fingertips of my gloves? I go through a dozen pair of gloves every Spring to Fall. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - your poetry is always a pleasure to read... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Wonderful thought! I would love to see you while you inspire the five year old kids. Would happily send you my almost five year old grandson to participate in the day's activity. Let us know how they enjoyed the rain! Love, Margherita |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
as the rest have said a very interesting piece that has nice thoughts to dwell over. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
That is a very cute little post Maureen A pleasure to read. have a lovely day. Lindsay |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Sounds like you are contemplating the day? I find myself getting caught up in deep thoughts quite often. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
loved your ending, though, of course, it is all good...thank you for sharing this gem |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
a really nice pensive piece... =) |
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