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Eirian Member
since 2009-04-13
Posts 70 |
Flame This naked flame burns hot Dancing in the breeze, Writhing and twisting Melting me to my knees The world is aglow with My soft and gentle light, An enticing warmth In this endlessly dark night Shadows flicker around us, Past loves that since moved on This flame it envelopes us, This passion burning strong My warmth I pour into you As I melt into the night Your arms around me tighten The world now seems so right |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Flames (internal and external) mesmerize me. I love how they dance and flit so easily. I love the warmth and light on the walls as they glow in the dark. Very nice poem. Thank you for sharing it. Alison |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Shadows flicker around us, Past loves that since moved on This flame it envelopes us, This passion burning strong" ~ Nodding with understanding! And you wrote of it so well!   EA |
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